26 Apr 2010

Well not so sure about this one, it could have used a bit more work, but I need to keep the story going or this will take forever.

I doubted about using 'mom' or 'mum'. The dictionary tells me that saying 'mum' is über-british and mom seems more international, so I went for international.

On another topic, I'm really wondering if I'm making the panels too big...

UPDATE: Changed quite a lot... removed all the silly text, changed the layout, reduced panels, added some background. I'll try not to do this too much, otherwise I'll keep changing all the drawings forever :).

Update: Rearranged text (again...).

Edit: Reformatted, changed font.


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